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Friday 8 March 2013

Little Red Riding Hood.



Little Red Riding Hood

Once upon a time there was a little girl who was loved by everyone who looked at her, but most of all by her grandmother, and there was nothing that she wouldn’t have given to the child. One day her mother said to her: “Come, Little Red Riding Hood, here is a piece of cake and a bottle of wine, take them to your grandmother, she is ill and weak, and they will do her good”. Her grandmother lived out in the wood, half a league from the village, and just as Little Red Riding Hood entered the wood, a wolf met her. Little Red Riding Hood did not know what a wicked creature he was, and was not at all afraid of him.

 Little Red Riding Hood raised her eyes, and when she saw the sunbeams dancing here and there through the trees, and pretty flowers growing everywhere, she thought: 'Suppose I take grandmother some fresh flowers; that would please her too. It is so early in the day that I shall still get there in good time. The wolf went into grandmother’s house and he ate grandmother whole. Little Red Riding finally came to grandmother house. Little Red Riding said to grandmother “ You have big ears and grandmother said “All the better to hear you with darling”.

 Grandmother what big teeth you have “More the better to eat you with”. The wolf ate Little Red Riding. The woodcutter heard Little Red Riding Hood screaming and looked in Grandmother’s house. He ran inside and cut the wolf open. Out popped Little Red Riding Hood and Grandmother. After that Little Red Riding Hood went home and learnt to never talk to strangers.

1 comment:

Miss Paton said...

Hi San Tat,

I like your story on Little Red Riding Hood. We think you need to add more speech marks / dialogue in your writing. I like how you described Little Red Riding Hood.
Keep up the great writing,

From,
Miss Paton

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